A roll of her shoulder, a sway to the right, and her wrist settled alongside his on the armrest. She’d expected skyrockets. What she felt was not hiss, bang, sizzle. But the tiny hairs along her arm did sort of—well—dance. He didn’t mutter under his breath or pull away so she crooked her little finger, scratching softly along the outside of his hand. Her nail caught on something in the dark—a tiny patch of cushion, slick and square—then tripped over a long ridge of hardened flesh. Did his skin vibrate under her touch? She inhaled. The scent of coconut and black pepper filled her nose. Maybe a whiff of WD-40. She held the air in her lungs for a heartbeat. Savored it. Puffed it back out. Then lifted her whole hand and set it atop of his. His knuckles bumped along in a line under her palm: knotting tightly at first, then shifting and rippling as if they were thinking about making a run for it. She counted to twenty in her head. He didn’t move again. She counted to ten, her pinkie finger
The screen door had barely smacked him in the ass when she hailed from the pantry. “Hon? That you?” She leaned out into the kitchen, box cutter in one hand, can of chickpeas in the other. “Where’ve you been?” He raised his palm like a schoolboy, then noticed the silly canvas glove still covering it. He dropped it to his side, resisting the urge to hide it behind his back. Her eyebrows scrunched. “Gardening? Now? With everything we need to unpack?” “You said you wanted the flower bed weeded. Right? The rose bushes whacked?” He lifted ten grimy digits and waggled them at her. “I live to please.” “Hon! Be careful! I just mopped the floor.” He turned to the sink and slapped his hands together. Bits of wet slippery mulch and gritty soil scattered into the basin. If only the cartoon fruit came off as easily, he thought. “You weren’t hiding out, were you?” she asked. “Still mad at me about the matchbook thing?” He shrugged. Someday, when he hit Chicago again, he’d grab a new book to
REVISED Chapter Void: 1.3655976751203 by denlm, literature
Literature
REVISED Chapter Void: 1.3655976751203
Dying is a lot like being born. I’ve done both, so I can say this with authority. One moment I was in a safe, familiar place; the next I was spat out into the void—a place far from familiar and, for several scary seconds, not one bit safe.
My stomach fluttered up into my chest, just as it had the moment I was born.
My arms flailed, fingers splayed to grab hold of something—anything—solid and secure. Just as they had on April 16, 1958.
I sucked in a big ol’ lungful of air, unsure for a second what I was supposed to do with that sweet-sour thing filling my nose—the same way I had in the delivery room.
And
Chapter Void: 1.3655976751203 by denlm, literature
Literature
Chapter Void: 1.3655976751203
Dying is a lot like being born. I’ve done both, so I can say this with authority.
It was particularly true in my case. One moment I was in a safe, familiar place, surrounded by sounds and sights I recognized; the next I was spat out into the void—a place far from familiar and, for several scary seconds, not one bit safe.
My stomach fluttered up into my chest, just as it had the day I was born.
My arms flailed, fingers splayed to grab hold of something—anything—solid and secure. Just as they had on April 16, 1958.
I inhaled sharply, unsure what to do with the sweet-and-sour scent filling my nose—the sam
A roll of her shoulder, a sway to the right, and her wrist settled alongside his on the armrest. She’d expected skyrockets. What she felt was not hiss, bang, sizzle. But the tiny hairs along her arm did sort of—well—dance. He didn’t mutter under his breath or pull away so she crooked her little finger, scratching softly along the outside of his hand. Her nail caught on something in the dark—a tiny patch of cushion, slick and square—then tripped over a long ridge of hardened flesh. Did his skin vibrate under her touch? She inhaled. The scent of coconut and black pepper filled her nose. Maybe a whiff of WD-40. She held the air in her lungs for a heartbeat. Savored it. Puffed it back out. Then lifted her whole hand and set it atop of his. His knuckles bumped along in a line under her palm: knotting tightly at first, then shifting and rippling as if they were thinking about making a run for it. She counted to twenty in her head. He didn’t move again. She counted to ten, her pinkie finger
The screen door had barely smacked him in the ass when she hailed from the pantry. “Hon? That you?” She leaned out into the kitchen, box cutter in one hand, can of chickpeas in the other. “Where’ve you been?” He raised his palm like a schoolboy, then noticed the silly canvas glove still covering it. He dropped it to his side, resisting the urge to hide it behind his back. Her eyebrows scrunched. “Gardening? Now? With everything we need to unpack?” “You said you wanted the flower bed weeded. Right? The rose bushes whacked?” He lifted ten grimy digits and waggled them at her. “I live to please.” “Hon! Be careful! I just mopped the floor.” He turned to the sink and slapped his hands together. Bits of wet slippery mulch and gritty soil scattered into the basin. If only the cartoon fruit came off as easily, he thought. “You weren’t hiding out, were you?” she asked. “Still mad at me about the matchbook thing?” He shrugged. Someday, when he hit Chicago again, he’d grab a new book to
REVISED Chapter Void: 1.3655976751203 by denlm, literature
Literature
REVISED Chapter Void: 1.3655976751203
Dying is a lot like being born. I’ve done both, so I can say this with authority. One moment I was in a safe, familiar place; the next I was spat out into the void—a place far from familiar and, for several scary seconds, not one bit safe.
My stomach fluttered up into my chest, just as it had the moment I was born.
My arms flailed, fingers splayed to grab hold of something—anything—solid and secure. Just as they had on April 16, 1958.
I sucked in a big ol’ lungful of air, unsure for a second what I was supposed to do with that sweet-sour thing filling my nose—the same way I had in the delivery room.
And
Chapter Void: 1.3655976751203 by denlm, literature
Literature
Chapter Void: 1.3655976751203
Dying is a lot like being born. I’ve done both, so I can say this with authority.
It was particularly true in my case. One moment I was in a safe, familiar place, surrounded by sounds and sights I recognized; the next I was spat out into the void—a place far from familiar and, for several scary seconds, not one bit safe.
My stomach fluttered up into my chest, just as it had the day I was born.
My arms flailed, fingers splayed to grab hold of something—anything—solid and secure. Just as they had on April 16, 1958.
I inhaled sharply, unsure what to do with the sweet-and-sour scent filling my nose—the sam
I couldn't talk about it when it happened; I was on the road moving Noah into his first apartment (:cries: ) in Austin. BUT, I got a Daily Deviation on The Pain Eater's Tale last Wednesday! Many thanks and bowls of candy to @Zara-Arletis for giving it the nod, and to everyone who read, faved and commented on it. It came at a very good time, as my mental health has not been the best lately, and despite the quarantine and lots of time at home, I haven't been able to make a serious effort at writing. I've attempted some Bruja stuff, and it's baaaaaaad. Anyway, the feature is a wonderful vote of confidence, and I appreciate it. The DD has also revealed to me a serious flaw in Eclipse. Not sure how many of you knew this, but the old version of the site allowed you to view all the DDs someone has earned by going to deviantart.com/username/dds That doesn't work anymore; the feature is not available in Eclipse. That REALLY sucks, because CVs relied on that feature to see whether
My dad once told me that a good story should take you somewhere you have never been. In my search for good stories I have wandered trails through the high mountains carrying a pack and a rifle and a belt full of ammunition. Slipping on protruding rungs of iron as I tried desperately not to look down for the cliff fell away nearly a thousand feet beneath my feet to an unseen valley below, hidden by the driving snow. My wet gloves and boots searching, yearning, for the next rung. My captain urging me and my companions on. Then on the heaving deck of a frigate in the heaving seas of the Atlantic I stto at attention as punishment was adm
Jake rides the lift to the eleventh floor, walks to the corner of the hall and lets himself into his apartment.
The lights automatically bathe the room in a warm afternoon glow, the delicious sounds of Charles Mingus coming from everywhere and nowhere, Pithecanthropus Erectus filling the space, and before Jake has made it to the bedroom Monterose and McLean's dueling saxophones have him well abstracted from the stresses of the office, Waldron fingering the ivories, Willie Jones punctuating the remains of the day with staccato strikes, and Mingus himself holding down the bottom end, Jake unconsciously keeping time with each step.
In the bedr
Christopher swore if he ever set his feet back on solid ground, he'd never put them back in a spacecraft again.
He'd been assigned to this mission for a one year tour, but that had been extended five times, and he wasn't sure how much longer he'd last without completely losing his mind.
Actually, he swore quite a bit.
Sometime in the third year, he'd instructed the ship's AI not to speak to him unless his life was in danger. Not a word. He'd get status updates the old fashioned way, via textual readouts. He didn't want a 'buddy', and the omnipresent ship's systems had seen fit to chat to him in the most inappropriate times, reminding him t
Bruja [interlude] - Dongzhi by Memnalar, literature
Literature
Bruja [interlude] - Dongzhi
Air quality beacons slowly pulsed red-red-yellow, and Nuri crunched through grey sludge remaining from an overnight ice storm, hood pulled up and respirator hissing. She ducked into a taco stand, zipping the seal back up behind her. Nodded at Gardener, who had squeezed in among a pack of Jamaican day traders with the market feed scrolling across the sleeves of their iridescent suits. Gardener turned on his stool to face her. Held out a tinfoil cylinder. "Fake pork today," he grinned. Nuri pulled down her respirator, flopped her hood back. She took the cylinder, sniffed it. She unwrapped the taco and bit, thought about it, bit again. "Anything on the dog channel?" she said around her mouthful. "All quiet," he said, "Weird. Maybe they're all sleeping something off this morning." Just as well. Collars drew double rates until midnight, but neither of them really felt like dragging spoofers and deadbeats to lockup today, or shooting it out with a stimrunner's gang. Gardener was
In the end, after seven full moons, a dozen houses burned, and the bones of two-score villagers and seven unlucky knights had been strewn for leagues around, the farming clans took matters into their own hands. Heirloom silver from every house went into the smelter. Even the sullen, miserly old usurer was held down and fed whiskey until his silver molars could be pulled. They paid an itinerant bladesmith with as much coin, plum-wine and pelts as she could load on her wagon. They loaded the result of her craft into a huge, old siege crossbow left over from dozens of brushfire wars as this land changed hands from one king or another. And they waited until the next full moon, until they next heard the beating of leathery wings and claws skittering against the treetops. They would steel themselves with whiskey and plum-wine. They would aim for the center of the shadowy mass as it bent to feast. They would pray. Some balked at the plan of using the drunken moneylender as bait for
Shoot.
Oh, shoot!
Shoot, shoot, shoot.
Yes, that was what Lorin said. She couldnt deny it. She heard it leave her lips. Shoot? Any number of profanities would have been more appropriate under the circumstances, but her mothers training was kicking in when least expected.
She would say more later much more but right now there was no time. She had to concentrate on moving her foot from the gas pedal to the brake; had to convince her reluctant right hand to let go of the steering wheel and shift the car into park at fifty-five miles per hour screw the transmission. Had to remind hersel
Chapter 1
Arrival
She caught herself thinking.
Thinking about the squares. Hard. Whole. Easy to grasp. Every side perfect, every edge sharp. Never bleeding into each other. Black to white to black to white. Without beginning. Without end.
Before, there had been nothing. Now the squares were whispering to her in their sibilant, shuffling way. Now they were inserting themselves into her life. Could she go back? She wanted to. Desperately. But, no, there was only forward. She was being forced to think again. About the squares. Only about the squares. They beckoned, and she would follow, hoping their comfort wasnt a trick.
Case Report:
Starting this creative process far later than I should have, but better late than dead. For as my daughter threatened: "If you die before you finish that novel, you will go straight to hell." Whew. Missed it by thaaaaaat much.
Current Residence: Overlooking Egg Lake in MN Favourite genre of music: Classic Rock, Opera, Very Early Oldies Favourite photographer: Smurfette in Red - check out her awesome pix Favourite style of art: I'm eclectic Operating System: Macbook Pro MP3 player of choice: My iPhone Shell of choice: Station on the corner of Central & Talmadge Wallpaper of choice: Black w/big pink roses from mom's livingroom Skin of choice: The skin of any attractive willing male over 55 Favourite cartoon character: Dilbert Personal Quote: Life sucks and then you die. Then they bury you in a box in the backyard.
And she's back. At least for a bit. Check out my flash fiction post, a piece I wrote for an online class with best selling author, Chelsea Cain. Still not sure I like the new dA, but I do miss my old friends here. Hope some of you are still lurking.
I officially hate the new dA setup. Can't tell who has submitted what. So if you are a writer I normally comment about--and I don't--it's because I didn't see your work. I MISS the old customized icons and page layouts.