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March 1, 2009
jon.com: Prologue is an engaging start to the novel *denlm just finished in December. Summed up as an "online reality porn" meets "murder and mayhem," jon.com is a novel I'm looking forward to reading once published!
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gestalt
I hope this is more than inebriated romance.
I watch you in the diner.
I'm always watching, through mirrors, through doorways, seeing you and seeing me and knowing we're reflections of the same hypocrisy; I'm outside the television, this tellingvision, I'm disconnected, broken, the nerve between me and the rest of existence is strained and I see beyond your charades. I'm on the outside of the window, our interactions are equivocal, ambiguous, filtered and muted. My reality is a drunk prism, and your reality is an insane labyrinth of pattern, schedule, and bullshit.
The coffee at dinner makes remnants of the vodka at breakfast taste l
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Raskol
Our son and his wife sleep in separate rooms. They are painted the same colour and bear identical scars but are separated by a hall so long that by the time I walk from one end to the other, I am too tired to compare and know what is different.
That is the convenience of an oversized house, I think, that we did not have in our small one-room apartment—they never have to see each other’s faces. You remember the nights when we were given no choice but to lie next to each other, against the hard corner, when we were seething in each other’s anger. How wonderful it might have been to stare at a blank wall, letting the heat of our
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Tommy 1337
Dahl, your death was a tragedy,
But I'm almost glad you didn't see
The rising of the new way to
Make your kids' minds melt into goo.
I talk, of course, lest we forget
Of the abhorrent INTERNET.
None of us could contain our joy
When this delightful little toy
Made little Tommy shut his trap
(Much quicker than a lunchtime nap)
And seemed, at first, to educate
Rather than brain-assimilate.
But years rolled on and our new friend
Became the source of ghastly trends
And Tommy, now at age thirteen,
Became rather absurdly keen
On women – half cat, with huge breasts,
And arguments on which was best:
The Potter books or sparkly
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Although this novel is being posted as "Erotic", it might be less hard core than some readers like or expect. To my mind, it is more of an erotic thriller, with some very mature content included as needed. If after a chapter or three you think it has been misclassified, please let me know. I'll move it to General Fiction. For now, think "online reality porn" meets "murder and mayhem".
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Love, love, love. An ex-deviant friend of mine recommended this story to me, and I'm hooked after the prologue. A quick scan of the comments below has informed me that it's available for purchase, and I think that's a purchase I just might have to treat myself to, in spite of poverty. Expect to see more of me!