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CeeCee needed a job. Found a job. Screwed up the job. She just might keep it... if she can accept the old-school employee disciplinary protocols.
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This was a very interesting read. It brings out a wide palette of emotions and thoughts.
We can clearly imagine the whole situation, it seems very real thanks to the memory and experience which we all gotten with the current economy situation.
Carolyn is a well written character, it's really easy to like her
While on the other hand, Carter awokes negative feelings in me, which is also good, it shows how great You've created this lad.
At first I've felt bitter about CeeCees situation, seeing in my imagination that her boss is using the whole situation. However the ending of this erotic story made it perfect, we could get apeak at Carter's more delicate side.
It felt hard to read because of the mixed emotions which the story brought up, yet I could not stop reading it.